It was very well done. You really got the posture and face right and I felt like I could see how tense and pissed off he was. Just remember to really bold those lines in the future. (This was a test so I understand why you didn't.) Besides that it was really good.
Yeah I definitely need to stop using a sort of sketchy style and have single, simpler lines. Looks much cleaner that way. Appreciate the comment and review! I'll be working on a lip sync this next week, so stay tuned I suppose :P
I enjoyed it! Could be a bit longer though...but not bad for a first.
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